Students going to college far from home
When picking the right college there are many things to consider, and going far away may or may not be the best for some people. Though you don't have to limit your self to what is closest to you. There are a lot of positive things like independence, and a fresh start, and negative things that there are to consider like expenses and long distance relationships. Clarissa Thompson is a senior who will be attending Maine College of Art in Portland, after she was offered an amazing scholarship. "It's an opportunity to be in a different part of America" she says. She has moved only around Texas but is ready to be in a new place. She recommends going to school far from home because it's a great way to get a feel for living on your own. Though going to college is a great step forward "I'm always going to miss my friends and family". June Bendich is a senior that will be attending Pratt institute in Brooklyn, New York. She is comfortable being on her own, but has a brother in New York City so she has some convenience. She has not been away from home for more than a month, so she plans on beating home sickness with lots and lots of Chinese food. She lastly says that whether you go to college or not, it is your decision to make and "I honestly don't think I have any reason to tell other people where to go to college. I can see the benefits of staying close to home and of going far away."
This is a good idea but it's a bit short to fill a whole newspaper page. You also should structure your story into multiple paragraph breaks with a new paragraph for each quote. I appreciate that you have two different sources in the story. That's impressive. Either more examples or a fuller interview with these two would have made the story a better length for the page-design assignment. 87
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